The power of a touché….

How many of you have heard or memorized this line?

“Hello, my name is Inigo Montoya.  You killed my father. Prepare to die.”

From the Princess Bride, one of the best movies ever, this statement always precedes a sword fight.

One of the things I do besides grantwriting and university teaching is the sport of fencing.  Like any combat sport, there is a lot to be learned that goes far beyond the physical activity of fencing.

Let me share you a story and then relate it to grantwriting.

Getting to go to the National Fencing Championships is the goal of my exercise and training.  I work all year, about 10-15 hours a week, sweating and sometimes being yelled at by my coach, attending other tournaments, and so on.

At the National Championships you have initial rounds and then direct elimination bouts.  After the initial rounds, the lowest 20% of fencers are cut.  They’re done.  No matter how many hours of practice they attended, no matter how much sweat they exuded, no matter how much money they spent on equipment, they are done for the year.

No one wants to be in that group.  The “did not make the cut” group.

In July 2013, I was at the National Championships. My overall goal was to advance to the direct elimination rounds, and possibly win one of those bouts.  In the initial rounds I did not do as well as I had hoped but I thought I would make the cut.  It would be close, I knew, but, still, there was hope.  As it turns out, I didn’t make the cut.  It was close—but, I did not make the cut by one (1) touché (or touch, as we’d say in English) .

For 52 weeks, I had spent at least an average of 10 hours per week (520 hours, or the equivalent of 65 work days, or about 13 weeks at a full-time job).  And the result?  By one touch, I didn’t move forward.

Is it possible that I would have worked a bit harder, been a bit tougher, put myself out there just a bit more during the initial rounds if I had known it was going to be one touch that separated me from my goal to make the direct elimination rounds?

Fast forward one year, to July 2014.  National Championships.  Same event, many of the same opponents.  Same set up.  Same goals.  In the initial round—again, I didn’t do as well as I hoped for.  Was I going to make the cut or lose out for the second year?

I replayed the previous year in my mind—was it going to be the same story?  Finally the results came out.  This time, I had made the cut—by one touch.  I looked at the name of the next person on the list who was eliminated and remembered how that felt.  I was glad it wasn’t me.

I went on to in the direct elimination round and fenced hard.  I really wanted to achieve my goal of winning in this part of the tournament.  I ended up losing this bout, by–guess how much?–one touch, with a final score of 9-10.  Was I disappointed overall?  Sure, but it was a good bout and well fought.  It truly could have gone either way.  I had made part of my goal for the tournament, and, after some prodding, I ended up feeling like I had made progress.

So what’s the connection with grantwriting?

There are three lessons I see.

  1. Every point counts.  When your proposal is being scored, every single point counts.  Some proposals will be funded and some won’t.  Having a higher score is always a good thing.  If you knew that you were going to be one point short of being funded, wouldn’t you work just a bit harder, spend a bit more time, find a way to get one more fact to support your case?  You never know what the score is you’ll need to receive to make the cut to be funded, but you surely understand that more points are to your advantage, right?
  2. Keep learning as you go—don’t give up.  In a fencing tournament, it’s easy to tell when you’re doing well and when you’re not against a particular opponent.  You’re scoring or being scored on.  Your tactics are working or they’re not.  You’re winning or you’re losing.  And what works in one situation won’t necessarily work in another.  You have to be flexible and change as needed.  In grantwriting, it’s the same thing.  Each proposal you write is a new contest.  Afterwards, you’ll know how you did—whether you won or lost.  And what works (or doesn’t work) in any particular grant competition may or may not work the next time.  You’ve got to learn from each experience.  If you receive comments from reviewers, be sure to read them carefully.
  3. Measure your progress, not your disappointment.  I still haven’t won the National Championships.  In fact, it’s quite likely I never will.  My initial thought when I lost in the direct elimination round this year was that I hadn’t learned anything during a year’s worth of hard work and effort.  It took a friend to point out that I had done better than the year before.  I was so busy looking at the fact that I didn’t do as well as I wanted that I forgot to notice the level of improvement.  As you write grants, focus on how much closer you’re getting to being funded.  Especially in this Age of Scarcity, writing successful grants is becoming more difficult and the competition is fiercer than ever.  Look for the areas of improvement and congratulate yourself on those as well as looking at what can be improved.  A combined view will keep you motivated and pushing forward, and should lead to success.

As you’re working to achieve excellence for nonprofits, keep these lessons in mind.  You may not be a swordfighter, but you surely have other activities that you can draw upon for lessons in grantwriting.  Post them in the comments below so we can all learn from you!

Of course, it also helps to stay up on the latest trends and information.  I’ll be presenting webinars to assist both new and experienced grantwriters do their jobs better.  My webinars will focus on how to deal with the constant pressure to find and win grants, dealing with tight deadlines and the sometimes ridiculous requirements of funders.

These webinars will help you “read funders’ minds”—you’ll be able to crack the code of what funders are looking for and what they’re really saying.  By applying these principles, you’ll be able to write grants that support the missions important to you and receive deep appreciation from organizations you work for.

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Thanks for all you do!

Richard Hoefer

Excellence for Nonprofits!


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